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Post by |Ϫ|Skystar| on Jul 25, 2009 18:21:01 GMT -5
Plot Title: 4 leaders 1 stone
Characters involved: Icestar, Wildstar, Talonstar, Skystar, Stone (stone is a rouge/exile, I need someone other than the people that play leaders to make him/her)
also any cat willing to battle for the clans or the exiles is welcome.
Clans involved: All clans, A large group of rouges and/or exiles.
Storyline: Stone is a bloodthirst cat, he/she begins to slowly gather rouges and exiles, stone has not intention on taking over the clans, just killing the four renouned leaders; Ice, Wild, Talon, and Sky. As moons pass stone plans, he/she (once we have enough cats) launches groups to attempt to asasinate the leaders, the first attempts fail but stone doesn't give up. Attacks are launched when least expected untill there is finaly one huge battle, who will win? the banded together clan cats of the rouges?
Activity: pending
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Post by §Wildheart§ on Jul 25, 2009 18:32:23 GMT -5
Oo. I lub it.
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Post by |Ϫ|Skystar| on Jul 25, 2009 18:57:28 GMT -5
Thnx u. I just have to wait for an applicant to make stone...
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Post by §Wildheart§ on Jul 25, 2009 18:59:46 GMT -5
Yeah.
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Post by Sandwhisker on Jul 26, 2009 9:09:53 GMT -5
I could make Stone...
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Post by §Wildheart§ on Jul 26, 2009 12:37:53 GMT -5
It's okay with me, if we do go along with the plot.
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Post by ۞Icestar۞ on Jul 26, 2009 12:47:21 GMT -5
I likey plot but dont get it that well
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Post by §Wildheart§ on Jul 26, 2009 13:05:22 GMT -5
rogues tryin to kill da leaders.
den a BIG battle
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Post by Sparrow on Jul 27, 2009 21:41:53 GMT -5
I like, its good.
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Post by §Wildheart§ on Jul 27, 2009 21:53:50 GMT -5
Yeah, me too.
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Post by Sacrifice on Jul 27, 2009 22:02:06 GMT -5
I don't know, to tell you the truth. I mean, it is a good idea, don't get me wrong, but I think its a bit, shall we say, overused? No offense intended of course, its just I've seen a lot of rogue battles before. Maybe if we alter it slightly, something like this;;
Things had always been tense between the clans, but that was nothing compared to the way the clans were with the rogues. Vile traitors, they called them, nothing better then a bit of fresh kill. The rogues of course, tended to think the same about the clan cats. As the moons went on, the tensions only rose. A battle seemed to lurk on the horizon, but there were traitors in the mixes of both Clan and Rogue. A clan from each clan, at different times, went to converse with the rogue leader Stone, each promising to protect the rogues, if their clan would be let alone. The blood thirsty cat he was, Stone accepted all, knowing at the time of battle, all would fall. The four clan cats, with their minds at ease, began to look forward to the looming battle, each thinking they would win.
When the battle finally started though, they were all shocked to find something; instead of fighting against the rogues, the clan cats fought against each other! Fur was shredded, and foul words spat. The battle was won, that time, for there were a few who still fought against the small band of rogues. The next time though, unless the four learned how to work with each other, might not be the same...
Can the clans learn to work with each other, instead of against? Can they put away the rivarly that has always made them different? Or will Stone, with his growing force, win the final battle, and force the clans out? Its all up to the clans, and their belief in StarClan, for only the stars can set them on the right path.
Which side will you choose?
Maybe something like that? This is a rough thought, buy the way.
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Post by »twigclaw« on Jul 27, 2009 22:21:00 GMT -5
One problem I see is that there is already a STONEshadow, so....it would be a bit confusing. And, I like Sacrifice's (Stoneshadow) idea, but it could also use work, too. Maybe we can all share our little alterations of Sacrifice's and Sky's plot to try and get to one that's really good. I call this type of plot-making a Storyboard.  Most people actually call it that. |
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Post by Sparrow on Jul 28, 2009 0:01:27 GMT -5
Ooh I love both ideas. But Stoneshadow is kinda right about the used thing...
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Post by §Wildheart§ on Jul 28, 2009 8:40:57 GMT -5
Yeah. The second one's kinda like V1's thing, except his name was Ice and he was a former deputy...Let's keep brainstorming, but both of those ideas are great and they are definatly an option.
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Post by |Ϫ|Skystar| on Jul 28, 2009 9:19:00 GMT -5
OHMYFRIKENGOD!!! THE CLANS DO WORK TOGETHER IDIOT!!!! IN THE END THE BANFD TOGETHER TO TAKE OUT THE ROUGES, I NEVER SAID ANYTHING ABOUT CLAN RIVALRY!!!!! I ALO MADE THE PLOT BEFORE STONESHADOW MADE THE CHARACTER!!!!
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